Warp - Astrofisiks

Yeah pretty basic track what do you think
https://soundcloud.com/user-714562021/warp
Its pretty short but whatever

I listened to your track, so here’s my input.

The beginning starts out pretty fast and it almost immediately into the main part of the song. Maybe try and slow it own some and introduce your ideas more. That will make it longer.
Next is that the reverb on the piano part stuff doesn’t really fit with the song imo. If you take that down a lot, your ideas will be much more clear.
Finally, at 30s or so, the new piano part sounds completely separate from the rest of the song except for maybe the chords. I’d try an rework that and it will probably sound a lot better