I need help with notes

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I’m not very knowledable with notes and things because I’m a drummer in my high school marching band so I don’t get much practice with them. But in this little arrangement, the first 4 bars have chords that sound kinda serious and more of a deep tone. I wanted to change the chorus around so in the next 4 bars, I accidentally ended up with more sentimental and uplifting sounding notes. I really like the second 4 bars because of the uplifting aspect but I wanted to know if the first 8 bars work together in terms of their chords. And if they don’t, then how I could change the first 4 bars so they do work together. Thank you so much in advance!!

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I hear what you’re talking about, but I think this sounds great and wouldn’t change a thing. Really nice vibe. Just keep doing what you’re doing!

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Thank you so much! I will keep going with it and hopefully it turns out pretty good

Sounds alright to me :blush:

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