G4vin [WIP, Project] - seeking feedback

I have been making music since about a week before thanksgiving, and would really appreciate tips, and feedback on what I am making

https://app.auxy.co/projects/MCo7P0JsqBVIGYthtnCDjQ==

This is one of my newer songs
It’s not done yet…

I would suggest not playing an impact on every measure.

Honestly it kinda fits though. I’d suggest working on the Tonsil line, I feel like Tonsil just isn’t the right instrument. Otherwise it’s very cool! Keep up the good work!

Okay thanks
I will take that into consideration

Okay, what instrument would you suggest if not tonsil

Thanks for the feedback

Not sure exactly what sound. Play around with it a bit, maybe do some layering. If you change it and want my opinion though feel free to ask! I think you’re doing a great job!

Alright, thank you for the help

No problem!