La musica de Paul https://soundcloud.com/paul-meribe/firsts
Good melodies. A few things to make it way better, it sound very hip hop / trap ish so add more hats and make em “sprinkly” 
. Also on the drop the bass came in a little late. I would suggest checking for things like that before posting next time. Overall I liked it but it needed some work. Also add some drum variety, change it up a bit sometimes 
. That’s a lot to take in but I’m tryna help 
Thanks means a lot . Always looking to improve 