Feedback on my new song!

I would love some feedback on this song I finished! Please don’t hesitate to be critical.
https://soundcloud.com/kipsto/pulse-prod-kip

If you want to remix:
https://app.auxy.co/projects/8UGMRypaBBCmTWtE2a6Wew==

It’s got a decent, Summery groove — and a good first song.
I think it would benefit from a bit more development, including adding a few changes in structure along the way — to change up the vibe a bit during — or at least, to break up the repetitiveness of that part (it’s the hook that you end on, which runs throughout almost the entire track).

I also think the heavy bassline could be dropped back a bit or developed so there’s more movement over more bars. That repeating 1-bar bassline only adds to the sense of lack of movement, imo.

Still, tidy for a first song. :+1:

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Um the song in your link doesn’t sound right