Broken Hearts — Osharu Pérez (No collabs, just tips?)

Any tips on how I could make this song better?
I don’t know why, but I just don’t seem satisfied with it so far…Any tips?
NO COLLABS
DON’T STEAL MY MUSIC

https://app.auxy.co/projects/noTqhFcyXEB85XwudLVGKQ==

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No replies within the first few hours to this topic of me asking for help…

“Well then, time to cry myself to sleep…”
:joy::joy::joy:

Well… genre? No one ever posts genres. So the correct audience is not targeted.

Don’t know the genre!!

Maybe give it a listen, and let me know the closest it would be?