My brother told me he feels the melody is a bit boring and I can kinda see it. Any thoughts or suggestions? Any feedback would be much appreciated
it’s not bad, although I prefer that you make a melody that has two variations for an 8-bar scene. Your brother might only be saying it because, you know, sibling rivalry . Anyways, it’s good, I just wish it could’ve been a long one.
Alone in Rome - Falling (1.1)
Changed Main melody, A note was moved and strum effect was added
Added chords to fill the drop
Guitar twinkly was too overpowering so I toned it down
Guitars “All” changed very last note of 4 bar loop to create a bridged loop.
Song very good overall, can’t wait to see finished product
In my personal opinion, I would have taken the song in another direction with the drop or taken some of the Instruments out in different parts and substitute them in a 2nd drop. A few tips to improve are to change up the drums or add bars that act as fillers but are transitions.
Loving that square you put in. I’m gonna see what I can do with your changes thank you so much for putting the time into helping
Sounds awesome keep it up !